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In air this clear
Soundwaves..travel----{crosscultures
Windy~insensible
Sate||ites
Send to my r*ception

(On days like today I can hear your voice)

Trulyclearly
Open my eYes wide enough to
                                             stopseeing
You for what you are n't

***
but to dispell that magik
on such a /warm/ \day\
where 's th' joy+?
   not in correct interpretations
   |--------
   why interrupt the somatic
component that is your everyexpression
when--so much satisfaction
to interact with the illusion that
you're crafting))
((trying not to bring it crashing
down -into- truth
   of easy seeing
***
On a warm day
[Vibrations] in the sky from
The =me I see in you to
The =you you see in me

(Subject me to your subjectivity)

Maintain your concentration
Hold me in your composition
©2006-2009 ~darkglassdolleyes
:icondarkglassdolleyes:

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Radio waves caress my skin: :they've leveled up!

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:iconhomiebear:
Cool, kinda trippy. I won't pretend I understood, totally. But fun to read and look at.

--
Does a bear Poo in the Woods?
Yes he does.
:icondarkglassdolleyes:
Thanks a lot--fun to read and look at is more the point than what it's about.
:iconhomiebear:
Yeah, poetry can be totally like that.

--
Does a bear Poo in the Woods?
Yes he does.
:iconforgivingmaiden:
Do you know the day...either late fall or early spring...everything is that golden brown...the light is of pâle & crisp nature. You walk, in an open, an open...a chill and pretty warmth. the view is upward is stark; the right is natural; the left is quieted metropolatin and you walk forward into the day with a closed-eyed smile. [?]
that, to me, is this poem

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~ I Met My Maker, I Made Him Cry ~
:iconwilder3:
Ferlinghetti
Your poetry makes one work.
But the glimpses of understanding are worth far more than the bit of wor required.
Very nice and a nice deviation also.

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:icondarkglassdolleyes:
Thanks. I don't really mean to make people I work. I sometimes prefer that people just find themselves in my work rather than looking for me.
:icondarkglassdolleyes:
I do, indeed, know that day, and am glad that I could call it to mind. I personally saw this poem as the second warm day of the spring: the surprise passes and the euphoria sets in.
:iconforgivingmaiden:
yes, combine yours with mine and i think we have it right. *something that resembles a held back smile

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~ I Met My Maker, I Made Him Cry ~
:iconwilder3:
I believe at time its good to make an audience work otherwise they get atitudes about what the hell it is they're supposed bre doing. beside a little never hurt anyone.

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